영어틀린부분 알려줄 천사 토리들 있을까?

아이엘츠 스피킹 과제 내는데 선생님이 2밖에 첨삭을 안해주셔 ㅜㅜ 2 첨삭해주고 3은 안 건드려도 된다고 하는뎈ㅋㅋ


그럼 1은 틀렸다는거잖아. 애초에 자긴 2만 첨삭해준다고 못박하서 쭈구리라 그냥 알겠다고 했는데... 어떤 부분을 고쳐야할지 모르겠어...

천사토리들 제발 도와주라!!please~~~


1. I can’t exactly remember, but it was probably in my first year at primary school when i was 8years old. I probably learnt simple addition and subtraction at that age.


2. I don’t like maths, because my major always demand math. It is not a simple calculations, so my brain always have to cope with the complex stuff.


3. Yes, I think it is. We all need a basic foundation in maths so that we can do daily tasks, like to pay our money, doing simple calculations and so on.


4. I don’t like cooking because I’m lazy of cooking. Cooking is a boring it’s something that has to be done, but it’s not really fun.


5. Of course my mother almost always did the cooking when I was young. At the time, I was happy because my mother made me delicious bread and food.


6. It is not important to cook well, because there are many restaurants and shops out there. So you can buy fresh meals everywhere.